Challenges

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TinyShine

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9th Oct 2006 at 8:58 pm

TinyShine -

 
I'm not sure if this idea will catch on but I thought to ressurect some interest in the poetry board (!) , we could set each other challenges in the forms of certian topics or styles to write a piece of poetry or prose in? Sometimes i really struggle for inspiration and a little challenge can generate some new, fresh ideas and get the creative juices flowing again!

So i thought i'd set the first challenge, and anyone who wishes to take up the challenge (gosh, i make it all sound a bit dramatic!) can post their effort in the thread! Also, everyone else can feel free to submit challenges to provide more inspiration!

So this is my challenge:

Write a personna poem. This is a poem in which you take on another's perspective. You write as though you are that person/object/thing... It might be a historical figure, an animal, someone you know, a door...! ok, it can be anything!

Here is an example to get us going, a Sylvia Plath poem in which she writes as though she is a mirror or a reflection.

Mirror

I am silver and exact. I have no preconceptions.
Whatever I see I swallow immediately
Just as it is, unmisted by love or dislike.
I am not cruel, only truthful-
The eye of the little god, four cornered.
Most of the time I meditate on the opposite wall.
It is pink, with speckles. I have looked at it so long
I think it is a part of my heart. But it flickers.
Faces and darkness separate us over and over.

Now I am a lake. A woman bends over me,
Searching my reaches for what she really is.
Then she turns to those liars, the candles or the moon.
I see her back, and reflect it faithfully.
She rewards me with tears and an agitation of hands.
I am important to her. She comes and goes.
Each morning it is her face that replaces the darkness.
In me she has drowned a young girl, and in me an old woman
Rises toward her day after day, like a terrible fish.



Your turn

Sarah xx

History For Sale

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9th Oct 2006 at 11:00 pm

Now our history is for sale....

 
It's a bit guff but I had a shot.

The thoughts of a lonely Postcard.

I sit on my display
Watching the people go by
My picture beautiful.

A bright summers day in July
A long golden beach
My secret cove
The depths hidden to all but me.

Blue sky, bright sun,
Dots of coloured personalities,
Each diffferent.

I ponder on these people,
were they really on that beach
of Golden sand?
Was that blue sky ever real to them?

Does that little girl have a name?
Is it possible to be as in love
as those two seem?

I watch the sun go down over my shop,
The people go to dinner,
Talking, joking, laughing
In their finery.

I ponder upon my destiny
With whom I shall be leaving
Will they take care of me?

Shall I be a personal gift?
With message written dearly?
Or shall I be an obligatory 'hello'?
To end up in the bin?
I only want you to see
My favourite part of me
And not my ugly side
Not my ugly side

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Chris Kamara

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10th Oct 2006 at 11:37 pm

Chris Kamara -

 
I've just spent a while trying to do my first ever poem for this and I plain can't do it. I suck Ah well. It's a shame 'cos it's a nifty idea for a thread.

Edit: For the record, I attempted to write it from the perspective of my cat. What a life he has.

Edited by Chris Kamara Oct 2006

TinyShine

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12th Oct 2006 at 4:12 pm

TinyShine -

 
Here's my attempt...!

Cloud

When I materialise as your perception,
my billowing white artistry
will be your psyche.
I shall discentigrate your imagination,
filtering it west in azure,
silencing the slipping seconds
to a trail you trace like
continuing punctuation...
finishing nothing
until you
blink

And I belong to another.


Sarah xx

TinyShine

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17th Nov 2006 at 9:20 pm

TinyShine -

 
This kinda fell a bit flat...oops!

But I can set another challenge if anyone fancies a go?! No problem if not

Sarah xx

Chris Kamara

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18th Nov 2006 at 1:00 am

Chris Kamara -

 
Yeah, set another challenge

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18th Nov 2006 at 9:51 am

 
(worm)

Wibble

ooof!

dug up again!

damn kids, always the same

im not a toy

It's no fun game

but damn those dumb kids

this just aint my day
Im gone , and you can bite me. cockbite's


 
 
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