Less Of A Poem, More Of A 'Rap' ..
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.. I mess about on a few hiphop boards, mainly with this type of poetry they call Scrypt (Look it up on Wikipedia or whatever ..)
This is from a topical league I took part in at one of them.
Enjoy or endure.
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[u]“
eflowered Rose”[/u]
Under the guise of darkness, lies a heartless, guy who hides the carcass…
…of a seven-year-old school girl back in his high rised apartment.
She'd tried her hardest,
To escape the ropes he'd tied her arms with…
…before this tyrant started to divide her garments,
And molest the child regardless.
…
The violence started, once she'd rejected his evil suggestion…
…he beat her 'til her cries for help were little more than silent yelps.
The pungent stench of his stale breath, clung to her pale flesh…
…and she balled her fists at each sordid kiss, placed upon her by his morbid lips.
A single finger prised open the pink insides of this shrinking violet...
...and as his assertive hand plundered her cervic glands -
He barely blinked an eyelid.
Rose couldnt bring her eyes to meet the glare of this demon,
So, tearfully, she stared at the ceiling - Feeling her innocence tearing and bleeding...
His arms were strong and sculpted,
With veins that fed him copious strength...
...as he made a grope for her neck, held her over the bed and choked her to death.
...
Now under the guise of darkness,
There lies a heartless guy who's prides departed,
That roams the streets hoping to find his targets...
To Be Continued ..
This is from a topical league I took part in at one of them.
Enjoy or endure.
[u]“
eflowered Rose”[/u]Under the guise of darkness, lies a heartless, guy who hides the carcass…
…of a seven-year-old school girl back in his high rised apartment.
She'd tried her hardest,
To escape the ropes he'd tied her arms with…
…before this tyrant started to divide her garments,
And molest the child regardless.
…
The violence started, once she'd rejected his evil suggestion…
…he beat her 'til her cries for help were little more than silent yelps.
The pungent stench of his stale breath, clung to her pale flesh…
…and she balled her fists at each sordid kiss, placed upon her by his morbid lips.
A single finger prised open the pink insides of this shrinking violet...
...and as his assertive hand plundered her cervic glands -
He barely blinked an eyelid.
Rose couldnt bring her eyes to meet the glare of this demon,
So, tearfully, she stared at the ceiling - Feeling her innocence tearing and bleeding...
His arms were strong and sculpted,
With veins that fed him copious strength...
...as he made a grope for her neck, held her over the bed and choked her to death.
...
Now under the guise of darkness,
There lies a heartless guy who's prides departed,
That roams the streets hoping to find his targets...
To Be Continued ..
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