Alice's Stuff (I'm Shy)

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The Man from Southampton

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11^th Mar 2006 at 4:16 pm

equality, tolerance & logic

Like the title contradictive

Happy yet depressing story

Now is that salary pre or post tax? �

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Captain Spiky

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14^th Mar 2006 at 7:31 pm

Cockwomble

Where's the happy bit, Sammy? I don't see it.

That's a powerful story, no doubt about it. And if I were a psychiatrist I could probably come to several slightly worrying conclusions about the author.

It's good though. Definitely. There were several lines I really liked - the whole concept of "identical, but not" is a fascinating one. It seems to be all about inadequacy, and the contrast between the 2 of them brings that sharply into focus.

And the title makes me think of Peter Cook, which is never a bad thing.

Now that we're here we may as well go too far.

Topper

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3^rd Apr 2006 at 10:05 pm

Dismantling a person is sometimes necessary...

"I smash the silver surprise of the blunt knife into her perfect face."

Nice line.

A generally very good bit of work there.

I hope some day, for some reason, David Duchovny is investigated by the FBI. Because that would make a great story.

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