Bab's Poetry

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Organised Confusion

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2nd Sept 2005 at 10:18 pm

 
Hey there, just discovered this board and thought I'd share some of my "cheery" poetry with you...

Organised Confusion

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2nd Sept 2005 at 10:19 pm

 
Emptiness

Staring blankly at a TV screen,
Sound rebounds.
It will not penetrate my frozen mind.
In truth, nothing is
Wrong, nothing is
Right. Only a
Void filled with emptiness exists.
It is not me who watches.
A ghost has stolen my soul
And left me
Alone to cry.

Organised Confusion

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2nd Sept 2005 at 10:20 pm

 
The Darkness Has Ceased

The darkness has ceased,
Light unfolds.
Tunnelling, tunnelling
Through the mist.

Eyes, eyes,
Watch us fall and
Stare silently.
Won't you return?
Never.

Organised Confusion

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2nd Sept 2005 at 10:21 pm

 
Breaking Free

The black sky hangs above
The world. On tenderhooks, building
Suspense until it will explode.
Hundreds of people. Below. Waiting.
For the bomb.
Never to know when it will go, but they
Know it will eventually.
Light is present. Yellow hope
Above grey blankets of doom,
Tries to break free like a prisoner,
Making the scene more sinister
and the pressure mounts.
Silence.
Then one escapes.
Just one at first but more follow.
Each time becoming more brave as they
Batter and
Torture.
There is no stopping them, it is impossible.
They carry on consistently and only
Stop when they decide.
Never before.

Organised Confusion

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21st Sept 2005 at 10:53 pm

 
Yeah, sort of. It's just about when nothing is really wrong but not feeling happy within yourself, and feel you are "going nowhere fast" so to speak. I agree about the ghost bit, just liked the assonance


 
 
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