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Griff

| 764 posts

1^st Nov 2004 at 7:10 pm

(indoors)

There is a girl
She never noticed me
Tell one day someone told her I love her
And how they laughed
Oh how they laughed

She is so great
She talks to me
And I feel my life is almost complete
Everyone may mock
Everyone may jeer
But I'll show them
When I have her in my arms

She doesn't know how much I like her
I don't think she really cares
But I need to find somebody
For me
There's someone out there
For me

I'll never know
She's too good for me
And yet somehow I can't give up
It's too painful
I don't know what to do
Please tell me what to do
I just need a helping hand or two
To make me happy again
She still is my friend

Edited by Griff Nov 2004

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Tinkerbell

| 1,023 posts

2^nd Nov 2004 at 1:02 pm

Its Jah Love That Im Waiting On

[glb]BRAVO [/glb]

Excuse me while I light my spliff
Good God I gotta take a lift
From reality I just can't drift
That's why I am staying with this riff

Griff

| 764 posts

2^nd Nov 2004 at 5:31 pm

(indoors)

Thank you people

Griff

| 764 posts

29^th Nov 2004 at 6:56 pm

(indoors)

My friend, she has
had an operation.
won't see her for two weeks

Don't know how I will cope, but sometimes life is bleak
I hope you understand
Someone hold my hand
She had a bunion
noone make a fuss

You don't have to jeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeer
But i hate life, its queeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeer
now its seems so cleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeear
I need to think of her, then I can move on

I know I can.

Griff

| 764 posts

16^th Dec 2004 at 6:49 pm

(indoors)

The girl she's dating my best friend
I don't know what to say
I need to get my mind in gear, prioritise what I need to say
She may like me less depending on what I do
But then that'd be what I deserve
I'm a speck of dust
Or less

But that doesn't matter 'cos she'll soon be mine
She's the one making my life worthwhile
She may or may not but
As I always say
You can't prove it won't happen

Griff

| 764 posts

16^th Dec 2004 at 6:50 pm

(indoors)

He dumped her but at the moment im unpopular and she's ignoring me.

Rats

Griff

| 764 posts

16^th Dec 2004 at 6:51 pm

(indoors)

Not really in a good mood so no poems for a while (who said "hooray"?) I'll get you.

Contemplating suicide, frankly.

[edit: Not any more folks!]

Edited by Griff Oct 2005

bob fletcher

| 1,339 posts

17^th Dec 2004 at 11:00 am

woop woop

either don't altogether as that wud be tha best option....or..don't overdose..it rarely works.

erm honestly mate i was infactuated for ages too. its not worth it (and i know it doesn't seem this way) but in a year oro two you'll go oh sh*t what was i doing. some one will come along and it'll be a heart crushing time, and you'll have to make a choice, but if she doesn't want you, then you don't want her. i think thats the best i can do.
i knmow it will make no difference, i was there i know how it feels, and i know someone saying this to me wud
1) wind me up
2) not make the blindest bit of difference.

however i first got writting over this girl, so i look forward to seeing oyur poetry in future mate.
chin up, your great.

you are love to me, an epiphany,
you set me free and let me be
and one day i'll be love back for you
and you can know what it feels like too.

Griff

| 764 posts

17^th Dec 2004 at 7:58 pm

(indoors)

A friend of mine named flo had to go to canada. I still contact her. This poem is for her.

Hey Flo
Even tho your gone
I still remember your face
and how nice you are

The times we chat are nice but the bits between are long
and if i visit canada i hope to see you there
you're great and fun and smart
so I hope you will remember me always
for i will remember you.

Feed the worrlld... let them know its Christmas time.

Griff

| 764 posts

11^th Jan 2005 at 6:19 pm

(indoors)

Oh iPod mini I love you
Sound quality is great
Better than a shoe
It sounds supoib.

When I listen to it I forget my troubles.
For some songs the volume doubles.
I haven't figured that out yet...
(Currently: 459 songs)

The music is muchly varied
But its all good
Come on Drew burn me that disc sooooon....

You are blue.

Griff

| 764 posts

26^th Jan 2005 at 5:35 pm

(indoors)

I'm ever so lonely
I don't know why
I think I never will
I don't know why

Maybe because I have no friends
Or maybe because I'm thick and annoying too
Or maybe just because I'm feeble and weak
I don't have a clue

Loneliness cannot be shared
Everyone has a different experience of it
It can only be a similarity
I should put it on my CV

So lonely.

Griff

| 764 posts

6^th Oct 2005 at 6:49 pm

(indoors)

College is kinda cool
It's better than school
Yet it's harder
At least I see Catherine two years more

Griff

| 764 posts

8^th Nov 2005 at 8:06 pm

(indoors)

Relationships are a funny thing aren't they,
they can be obvious,
or they could be hardly there;

they can be great,
they can fail;
sometimes you do all the right things and they just don't work.
Sometimes you don't know how you feel,
sometimes you may already be in a relationship before realising someone else is right for you,
and some people can search their whole life for the special someone and never find it,
and sometimes it can be right under your nose.

MissGiz

| 24 posts

30^th Jan 2006 at 8:46 pm

Mornin' Guv'

to put simply...i like. tres coolies

If you don't like it...STOP LOOKING YOU NOSEY B*ST*RD
I'll Be A Lot of Things But Never Yours

Griff

| 764 posts

31^st Jan 2006 at 6:48 pm

(indoors)

Cheers.

I'll write more when I can.

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