Quote: Mesmerism_Cat_Anyone want a part 2 to the melting story?
Yes! Hmm, as for the why, I'd agree with Will. They do just appeal to me. The melting one, though, seems to have a natural flow to it which mirrors the language used ("melt... dissolve... flowing... floating..."), and it's just different to what I've come across before, I guess. Plus I think it helps that I saw the inspiration for this, although obviously it has some impact either with or without knowledge of the stimulus.
Also, this:
Quote: Mesmerism_Cat_I'm losing the battle,
I'm lost at sea, alone,
and the echoes of my voice
are haunting me.
just feels more personal, somehow. Like, as a reader we've scratched a little deeper beneath the surface.
So, yesh, that's just my opinion on the why of it all.