Another painful day

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Dissimulation

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5th Nov 2002 at 1:26 pm

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Another Painful day

A broken heart that lies in pieces
a shattered photo frame
a tortured man that sobs aloud
an unforgiven name
a tear-stained pillow muffles out
his silent crys of pain
a blood-stained razor by his hand
another severed vein
An empty needle on the floor
an arm that shows his scorn
a face that cannot hide the tears
a pride that's raped and torn
a noose that hangs around his neck
a chair that's kicked away
a name that haunts his dying lips
another painful day

hikey

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5th Nov 2002 at 1:27 pm

its the semi automatic stun gun!!!!!!!!!!!! yeehaw

 
f*ck thats good.
he aint all there he dont like beans!!!!!!!!!!!

Dissimulation

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5th Nov 2002 at 1:54 pm

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Ahhh....I'd have to get much better at guitar to do that

-jamie

Dissimulation

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5th Nov 2002 at 2:04 pm

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Be in a band...the lyrics will always remain average

hikey

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5th Nov 2002 at 2:18 pm

its the semi automatic stun gun!!!!!!!!!!!! yeehaw

 
hes right they are amazing they are they are they are so THERE
he aint all there he dont like beans!!!!!!!!!!!

Dissimulation

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5th Nov 2002 at 2:27 pm

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Thank you, guys Perhaps I'm too self-critical...tho I DO need guitar lessons..heh

-jamie

Dissimulation

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5th Nov 2002 at 2:58 pm

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Anytime man 8) If and when you get the music down and if you're still stuck for lyrics, just send me a demo tape or the mp3 links and the ideas you have already etc...then I'll try and help the best I can.

-jamie

clivey_baby

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5th Nov 2002 at 3:15 pm

 
i love this

Flapdoodle

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5th Nov 2002 at 8:44 pm

Flapdoodle - TO THE SEA...

TO THE SEA...

 
an amazing poem- im glad you put it up.

Will

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6th Nov 2002 at 6:14 pm

 
yeah i love it
i normally depise poems that rhyme, but that ones good.

Flapdoodle

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7th Nov 2002 at 12:01 pm

Flapdoodle - TO THE SEA...

TO THE SEA...

 
Quote: Jeff_The_Jiff_
yeah i love it
i normally depise poems that rhyme, but that ones good.


often poems that rhyme have a very predictable rhyme so thats often a reason i dont like some, but this is different.


 
 
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