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Sam_Wells

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14^th Oct 2002 at 6:30 pm

A
woven
phrase
or
two to
help
the
drink
go peacefully down

A
crafted
slice of wit
to entertain
those so
forcefully earned

You may have money but your soul is dead, not under fed

A charming manner but when faced with life you'll sell your wife

A splendid story of how you travelled the world, the riches unfureled

You'll qoute the classics so well, when you're in hell

But you're there already, cos your jobs well paid and steady

(BAH, this is crap)

Caged Liberty

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15^th Oct 2002 at 6:12 pm

Torrential high seas dragged me to my knees

I like the ideas but don't ike the rhythm

Sam_Wells

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15^th Oct 2002 at 6:23 pm

I'm just getting the ideas down first. My draft poems never have rythem.

Caged Liberty

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15^th Oct 2002 at 6:30 pm

Torrential high seas dragged me to my knees

it's admirable you can put your first drafts up here for public scrutiny.

I can't write on a computer, it has to be on scraps of paper.

Sam_Wells

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15^th Oct 2002 at 6:35 pm

Almost every poem I never posted on here was written at the computer. Apart from The Hypnotist's Channel which wasn't written as the words came to me on Saturday morning in bed.

Remember 2+2=5
It didn't exist

Caged Liberty

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15^th Oct 2002 at 6:41 pm

Torrential high seas dragged me to my knees

Yes honey.
As you wish honey.

Except the ones saved on my computer, that would be?

mwah

Sam_Wells

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15^th Oct 2002 at 6:43 pm

They exist, I suppose.

But the others are now just a part of peoples memory, one day to be forgotten. And when they do, they shall never have existed.

Caged Liberty

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15^th Oct 2002 at 6:47 pm

Torrential high seas dragged me to my knees

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