love poem for mr twiggy rameriez

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hikey

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21st Sept 2002 at 1:50 pm

its the semi automatic stun gun!!!!!!!!!!!! yeehaw

 
should i compare thee to a winters night, or a broken match hid out of sight?
your death mask face pleads with me
to smudge your eyeliner with brutalised kisses.
are you wooden or wax ?
my doll or my sculpture?
will you bend? do you break?
can i deafen you with my triumphant screams?
would you like to be compared to a fallen angel
or a rising unique star?
will you make your devil signs on my willing corpse
and play my night stalker?
i love you TWIGGY



hikey
he aint all there he dont like beans!!!!!!!!!!!

hikey

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21st Sept 2002 at 4:27 pm

its the semi automatic stun gun!!!!!!!!!!!! yeehaw

 
(its a hiaku~which i have probably spelt wrong seems daft)


it isnt by me


Covered with the flowers
Instantly id like to die
in this dream of ours.



Etsujin

stole by hikey
he aint all there he dont like beans!!!!!!!!!!!

hikey

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22nd Sept 2002 at 3:13 pm

its the semi automatic stun gun!!!!!!!!!!!! yeehaw

 
f*ck i was off the planet yesterday (put the vodka down boy) lol


sorry for being maudlin
he aint all there he dont like beans!!!!!!!!!!!

Caged Liberty

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22nd Sept 2002 at 5:36 pm

Caged Liberty - Torrential high seas dragged me to my knees

Torrential high seas dragged me to my knees

 
It's a nice Haiku but the first line doesn't have 7 syllables, only 6. But I like it.

hikey

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23rd Sept 2002 at 11:25 am

its the semi automatic stun gun!!!!!!!!!!!! yeehaw

 
ahhh but it is a hiaku by a master and im sure hes allowed to use his damned artistic license it is a beautiful one and it in keeping with tradition has a season word most ppl forget this
he aint all there he dont like beans!!!!!!!!!!!

hikey

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23rd Sept 2002 at 11:27 am

its the semi automatic stun gun!!!!!!!!!!!! yeehaw

 
flowers is a season word despite being a slightly glib one sometimes would be blossom or something percific (f*ck i cant spell) like lotus flowers
he aint all there he dont like beans!!!!!!!!!!!

Caged Liberty

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23rd Sept 2002 at 3:53 pm

Caged Liberty - Torrential high seas dragged me to my knees

Torrential high seas dragged me to my knees

 
Who wrote it?

hikey

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24th Sept 2002 at 11:35 am

its the semi automatic stun gun!!!!!!!!!!!! yeehaw

 
Etsujin

i send u some if you want?they are japanese i send you english
he aint all there he dont like beans!!!!!!!!!!!

uponthetelegram

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24th Sept 2002 at 4:38 pm

 
Can you send them me too, but in Japanese, cos it'll give me something to try and translate. I gave my Japanese-language manga anthology to Alyssa and I've got nothing to work on.

hikey

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24th Sept 2002 at 10:20 pm

its the semi automatic stun gun!!!!!!!!!!!! yeehaw

 
i will try sort it out for you mate but it might take me a while i have a book here,can translate but cant type the characters japanese on this heap of sh*te so could find you a site maybe easiest?
he aint all there he dont like beans!!!!!!!!!!!


 
 
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