My favourite poetry (2)

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Freshly Squeezed Cynic

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27th Aug 2008 at 11:20 am

Freshly Squeezed Cynic - apparently the big pink bastard is me

apparently the big pink bastard is me

 
I f*cking love Edwin Morgan. His concrete poetry, sometimes, comes so close to taking the p*ss, but it just skirts that line into genius.

First, "Message Clear" (link'd because I couldn't get it to work right on the board)

http://www.elgin.free-online.co.uk/misc/message.htm

and now "The Computer's First Christmas Card."

j o l l y m e r r y
h o l l y b e r r y
j o l l y b e r r y
m e r r y h o l l y
h a p p y j o l l y
j o l l y j e l l y
j e l l y b e l l y
b e l l y m e r r y
h o l l y h e p p y
j o l l y M o l l y
m a r r y J e r r y
m e r r y H a r r y
h o p p y B a r r y
h e p p y J a r r y
b o p p y h e p p y
b e r r y j o r r y
j o r r y j o l l y
m o p p y j e l l y
M o l l y m e r r y
J e r r y j o l l y
b e l l y h o p p y
j o r r y h o p p y
h o l l y m o p p y
B a r r y m e r r y
J a r r y h a p p y
h a p p y b o p p y
b o p p y j o l l y
j o l l y m e r r y
m e r r y m e r r y
m e r r y m e r r y
m e r r y C h r i s
a m m e r r y a s a
C h r i s m e r r y
a s M E R R Y C H R
Y S A N T H E M U M

Elusive Moose

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27th Aug 2008 at 4:35 pm

Elusive Moose - Get your Antlers on

Get your Antlers on

 
I think I'm just destined never really to like modern/experimental poetry.

To His Coy Mistress, on the other hand, is awesome. Though the worms line gets me every time.
"You can't roast infants. You just don't get away with it."- a life lesson for us all.


Wife of  Phil the Lawful Hippo. Imagine the children!

The Disneyafied Adventures of Me

Freshly Squeezed Cynic

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27th Aug 2008 at 7:19 pm

Freshly Squeezed Cynic - apparently the big pink bastard is me

apparently the big pink bastard is me

 
Oh come on, how can anyone not like the end of the last one

His normal poetry is damn fine as well, of course.

Elusive Moose

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27th Aug 2008 at 9:47 pm

Elusive Moose - Get your Antlers on

Get your Antlers on

 
I just got the end of it by reading it out.... *is slow* It's good/clever, but I'd still rather read too much into a poem that I can understand on a surface level straight away than have to spend time actually deciphering it in the first place, y'know..?
"You can't roast infants. You just don't get away with it."- a life lesson for us all.


Wife of  Phil the Lawful Hippo. Imagine the children!

The Disneyafied Adventures of Me

Velvet Soldier

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26th Oct 2008 at 1:09 pm

The Turtle Moves

 
William Blake London

I wander thro' each charter'd street,
Near where the charter'd Thames does flow,
And mark in every face I meet
Marks of weakness, marks of woe.

In every cry of every Man,
In every Infant's cry of fear,
In every voice, in every ban,
The mind-forg'd manacles I hear.

How the Chimney-sweeper's cry
Every black'ning Church appalls;
And the hapless Soldier's sigh
Runs in blood down Palace walls.

But most thro' midnight streets I hear
How the youthful Harlot's curse
Blasts the new-born Infant's tear,
And blights with plagues the Marriage hearse.

I'm sure this must have been posted before, and that you all know it, but it is still one of my favourites. I've always loved blake.
Why call it civil service when the service is anything but civil?

Velvet Soldier

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26th Oct 2008 at 6:19 pm

The Turtle Moves

 
indeed he is. i have a gorgeous illustrated version of songs of innocence and experience. Tis one of my most loved books.
Why call it civil service when the service is anything but civil?

Rayanne Graff

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30th Jan 2010 at 5:29 pm

Rayanne Graff - River Phoenix

River Phoenix

 
i remember watching a video of Tony Harrison reading that poem when i was at college. Our teacher told us that, when it had been shown on Channel 4, people complained about the language and i said that i disagreed with them compaining because it was relevant and not gratuitous.
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Delirium Tremens

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30th Jan 2010 at 6:08 pm

Delirium Tremens -

 
A friend of mine wrote this as a Ginsberg pastiche. He said it was exactly my kind of thing.

White Stains in Black Underwear

I daydream about Duke f*cking me in the a*s
While I bite down on the American flag
Pumping his rot into me, drugged out commie
You’d better unload your come, you son of a b*tch
Then I blast his scowl with juice from my mushroom

Riding the bus with visionary poverty, I look down
There’s a whole universe in my underwear!
Ten thousand worlds, ten thousand Buddhas
Every one from c*ck and c*nt, spurt and egg
A golden eternity spun from jissom!

Hey look, snooty skeleton with grin
Mighty polished skull, mallet bones for marimba ribs
Why are you so happy, exsanguinated sanguine?
Got it: no more nonsense fat of ill-karma come
Dharma no dream, into Pure Land reborn!

I want to put my key in your lock and turn
How’s about a tumble or two?
You sixteen year old athlete and my
Big hairy belly! I can be your Buddha daddy
I can f*ck the dharma right into you

Leather mask, leather assless chaps
No latex, I old fashioned sodomite, hail
Chögyam Trungpa Rinpoche on mantle
Sweaty drunken Bodhisattva beaming
Rectal incursion! Soggy pussy, you stay out!

Rayanne Graff

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11th Apr 2010 at 9:17 pm

Rayanne Graff - River Phoenix

River Phoenix

 
Quote: the doc, Mar 2010
Quote: Toodles, Mar 2010
I didn't even know about this thread. I'm having an Eliot phase. This poem is not much more than moderately good until the last four lines for me. No idea why I like those lines so much.


We are the hollow men
We are the stuffed men
Leaning together
Headpiece filled with straw. Alas!
Our dried voices, when
We whisper together
Are quiet and meaningless
As wind in dry grass
Or rats’ feet over broken glass
In our dry cellar

Shape without form, shade without colour,
Paralysed force, gesture without motion;

Those who have crossed
With direct eyes, to death’s other Kingdom
Remember us—if at all—not as lost
Violent souls, but only
As the hollow men
The stuffed men.

II

Eyes I dare not meet in dreams
In death’s dream kingdom
These do not appear:
There, the eyes are
Sunlight on a broken column
There, is a tree swinging
And voices are
In the wind’s singing
More distant and more solemn
Than a fading star.

Let me be no nearer
In death’s dream kingdom
Let me also wear
Such deliberate disguises
Rat’s coat, crowskin, crossed staves
In a field
Behaving as the wind behaves
No nearer—

Not that final meeting
In the twilight kingdom

III

This is the dead land
This is cactus land
Here the stone images
Are raised, here they receive
The supplication of a dead man’s hand
Under the twinkle of a fading star.

Is it like this
In death’s other kingdom
Waking alone
At the hour when we are
Trembling with tenderness
Lips that would kiss
Form prayers to broken stone.

IV

The eyes are not here
There are no eyes here
In this valley of dying stars
In this hollow valley
This broken jaw of our lost kingdoms

In this last of meeting places
We grope together
And avoid speech
Gathered on this beach of the tumid river

Sightless, unless
The eyes reappear
As the perpetual star
Multifoliate rose
Of death’s twilight kingdom
The hope only
Of empty men.

V

Here we go round the prickly pear
Prickly pear prickly pear
Here we go round the prickly pear
At five o’clock in the morning.

Between the idea
And the reality
Between the motion
And the act
Falls the Shadow
For Thine is the Kingdom

Between the conception
And the creation
Between the emotion
And the response
Falls the Shadow
Life is very long

Between the desire
And the spasm
Between the potency
And the existence
Between the essence
And the descent
Falls the Shadow
For Thine is the Kingdom

For Thine is
Life is
For Thine is the

This is the way the world ends
This is the way the world ends
This is the way the world ends
Not with a bang but a whimper.


You read The Wasteland? Think I posted all of it in this thread somewhere, or maybe it was in the old one...........that's a real favourite of mine. Really like The Love Song Of J Alfred Prufrock as well - "I should have been a pair of ragged claws/scuttling across the floors of silent seas."

Eliot is bloody hard work much of the time but he was absolutely brilliant in a smartarse, miserable f*cker kinda way.


You posted a link to the wasteland on page 4 of this thread and Steve posted the love song of j alfred prufrock on page 1.
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Rayanne Graff

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4th Oct 2012 at 7:54 pm

Rayanne Graff - River Phoenix

River Phoenix

 
High Flight by John Gillespie Magee, Junior

Oh! I have slipped the surly bonds of Earth
And danced the skies on laughter-silvered wings,
Sunward I've climbed, and joined the tumbling mirth
Of sun-split clouds, - and done a hundred things
You have not dreamed of - wheeled and soared and swung
High in the sunlit silence. Hov'ring there,
I've chased the shouting wind along, and flung
My eager craft through footless halls of air...

Up, up the long, delirious burning blue
I've topped the wind-swept heights with easy grace
Where never lark, or ever eagle flew -
And, while with silent, lifting mind I've trod
The high untrespassed sanctity of space,
Put out my hand, and touched the face of God.
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