Code, as Art?

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LoonyPandora

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4th Mar 2007 at 11:33 pm

LoonyPandora - Daft Cow?

Daft Cow?

 
Strings of strings and other such things
Compiled, refiled, refined
Incantations untold, the squiggles unfold
Decoded, reloaded, unkind

Look ahead, look behind, grab what we can
A match, a word, a line
Dynamic expression, embedded return
A sigil, a slash, a sign

Deadline approaches, write it out quick
Lazy impatience employs
Indistinguishable from magic, true
Elegant prose or just noise?

TinyShine

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24th Mar 2007 at 6:29 pm

TinyShine -

 
Hey, I really like this! It has great rhythm, which suggests to me you're not a stranger to writing as rhythm in writing is a skill, in my humble opinion

Hope we'll be treated to some more poetry soon, or is this a one off?!

Sarah xx


 
 
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