the doc's poems

i like these poems; especially Picture Perfect & I Said, You Said.

I love 'we awoke to snowfall'. Except for ONE thing- 'lips as red as blood'. We were talking about similes/ metaphors in class last week and one of the 'ultimate clichés' that came up was 'as red as blood', so now reading it makes me cringe... I don't know if you were trying to hint at a not-so-perfect undertone (if you get what I mean by that??), but either way is there anything you could change it to? Otherwise, I really like it

Also, 'My Twilight World' made me think of suicide/coming back from the brink of rather than anything drug related (think it's the Hamlet reference that turned me on to that interpretation though)

Anyway, nice work here