New idea....(I know, another one...)

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Albi The Racist Dragon

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6th May 2003 at 8:29 pm

 
I tried slightly more focused freestyling once, and wrote seven pages. It scared the crap out of me... Was a bit too self-indulgent to repeat however.
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sentient_toenail

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6th May 2003 at 8:35 pm

 
for that which we deny
the tune to whihc we feel
our soul screams and twistes
escaping the hold
and your grip
from whihch we did escape
now tempts us back once more
annd destroys us slowly
until
once there was a poor man
he liayeth down to rest
and now he sinks into the sand
and smothered by the air
thick as tar
and clear as glass
it sucks into my mind
the evil which it had become
infesting the world
and answering the great questions

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My attempt- complete with evidence that i cannae type without checking almost every word

Been training dogs

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6th May 2003 at 8:58 pm

 
and for some reason
the moment I try
words fail me, or I fail them, and I can't work out if that's philisophical or bullsh*t.
Probably a bit of both.

"Meiping had learnt to be philisophical at an early age". Such is the price of living in socialist china.
And duckponds.
Eyes the colour of duckponds. A tiny nose, whiskers and ears. Paw-socks. White ones.
"Yeah? Wash in your own spit do you?"

Too many particles and far too many quantum phenomena for one, slightly arrogant, extremely self obsessed sleep deprived n3rd.
I speak 1337 yuo know.
Maybe in order to understand mankind, we have to look at the word itself: "Mankind". Basically, it's made up of two separate words - "mank" and "ind". What do these words mean ? It's a mystery, and that's why so is mankind.

http://www.cco.net/~jpete/deepthou.htm

aporkalypse

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6th May 2003 at 9:23 pm

aporkalypse - rawr![/comedy finish]

rawr![/comedy finish]

 
I have diaries full of it, strangely it gets rid of some headaches...

Im going to go for gold here...stand back...

Alone, here I sit
I miss you, everything about you makes me scream for more
Nights spent wasted, lives have moved on
I still wait for you
Hush child, silence those wicked fears before
Someone imporatnt hears them
Run away, run into darkness
Tears before bedtime
Letters scattered, full of empty promises
Red carpet, wh smith A4 lined paper
full of wishes, hopes and fears
what if you dont know me any more
what if you dont like me any more
In the night sky, I whisper i miss you
I miss you so much, but you have gone
Left. lEFT left right left
put a brave face on troops, the calvary is here
Friends dont care to understand
Self tortured artist
Dominatrix of emotions
Shut up

I dont khow if this is teh right thing? Heh well...yuck fou
A firm favourite for fake alibis and general practices.

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Been training dogs

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8th May 2003 at 9:13 pm

 
I'm straight
the statement he didnt seem to figure when he asked me what she looked like.
but this is irrelevant, irrevocable and dark.
I might just scrape a pass in economics statistics
"She's a right little sl*g, uh i hate her"
"Thats half my year"
I can't. I'm working.
I have no time anymore. My watch serves only to tell me how late i am.
Serves what? Serves a plate of stew? Where did that come from?
Hole.
Dropping stuff into it.
Big, green and yellow sunflower comes out and saves the day.

Retry.
Maybe in order to understand mankind, we have to look at the word itself: "Mankind". Basically, it's made up of two separate words - "mank" and "ind". What do these words mean ? It's a mystery, and that's why so is mankind.

http://www.cco.net/~jpete/deepthou.htm


 
 
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