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Will

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3rd Sept 2002 at 10:29 am

 
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Edited by Will Jun 2006

Silvan

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3rd Sept 2002 at 11:38 am

Silvan - Aurals Velupide!

Aurals Velupide!

 


That gave me a constrictive feeling in my throat.
What can I say? I did it all for the Wookies.

Will

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3rd Sept 2002 at 11:41 am

 
you strangled yourself??

moominmamma

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3rd Sept 2002 at 11:42 am

moominmamma - buzz cut minge & the starspangled family planners

buzz cut minge & the starspangled family planners

 
very good poem that im sorry things are bad
god im so fat

Silvan

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3rd Sept 2002 at 11:43 am

Silvan - Aurals Velupide!

Aurals Velupide!

 


No, my hands were firmly on the keyboard and mouse. It gave me a lump in my throat just reading your poem.
What can I say? I did it all for the Wookies.

Will

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3rd Sept 2002 at 11:45 am

 
cool. i wrote it at about 2am a couple of days ago.

uponthetelegram

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4th Sept 2002 at 2:34 pm

 
I could write sh*t like that, but I won't.

Cliched.

uponthetelegram

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4th Sept 2002 at 2:36 pm

 
I'd rather write crap poems with new ideas than boring poems with old ideas (like most of his other poems).

And don't moan at me for having an opinion, it's more than some people here...










sheep

Will

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4th Sept 2002 at 4:11 pm

 
sorry, i wasnt really thinking of the clicheness of it or the crapness of it. i just wrote it. without stopping to think.

Caged Liberty

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4th Sept 2002 at 4:41 pm

Caged Liberty - Torrential high seas dragged me to my knees

Torrential high seas dragged me to my knees

 
Well, that's the best way, let it flow naturally.

Animal

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4th Sept 2002 at 4:47 pm

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Quote: Jeff_The_Jiff_
sorry, i wasnt really thinking of the clicheness of it or the crapness of it. i just wrote it. without stopping to think.

dont apologise for it
some people may think its a cliche some people might not

its up to the individual

if someone chooses to comment on something being bad/good whatever just take it in your stride and keep on doing what you do, its your own opinion that matters and no one else's

dont forget that.
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Will

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4th Sept 2002 at 6:28 pm

 
sorry

ok, im a very apologetic person

uponthetelegram

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6th Sept 2002 at 3:28 pm

 
Quote: Jeff_The_Jiff_
sorry, i wasnt really thinking of the clicheness of it or the crapness of it. i just wrote it. without stopping to think.


Sorry. Bad mood. But if it just came to you, fine.

uponthetelegram

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6th Sept 2002 at 3:29 pm

 
Quote: mojojojo_

dont apologise for it
some people may think its a cliche some people might not

its up to the individual

if someone chooses to comment on something being bad/good whatever just take it in your stride and keep on doing what you do, its your own opinion that matters and no one else's

dont forget that.


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