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outcast

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23rd Aug 2002 at 9:34 am

 
my heart seems unable to sleep,
thinking,
of the one i may never see,
will this ever stop,
i,
i believe,
feel,
cant stop this,
i bleed for her voice,
her hair,
the phoenix of my dreams,
has flown away,
but i cant be,
no,
not anymore,
this existance,
seems worthless,
money is worthless,
without hope,
of a future,
still,
my heart,
it sits,
my heart,
still,
not feeling,
alone in a,
still,
nightmare,
my heart feels,
nothing,
i alone,
bleed,
sitting,
in darkness,
feel nothing,
my heart,
it bleeds.

Will

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23rd Aug 2002 at 11:05 am

 
wow

uponthetelegram

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23rd Aug 2002 at 2:44 pm

 
You see, in my eyes, that's just words thrown together. And you all seem to think my poems are just word thrown together, but they're not. And of course, to Outcast, this poem isn't just words thrown together. But to me it is. That is the difference between me and the rest of you. You all seem to see the same.

LoonyPandora

| 17,916 posts


24th Aug 2002 at 1:28 pm

LoonyPandora - Daft Cow?

Daft Cow?

 
Think Different

1929

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28th Aug 2002 at 2:26 pm

 
What? Was that a rare blast of comedy genius from Loony? *applauds*
Triptoheaveandhoupdowntoandfroyouhaveno
wordtriptriptoadreamdragonhideyourwingsina
ghosttowersailscacklingateveryplatewebreak
krackedbyscatteredneedlesthelittleminute
goNg

LoonyPandora

| 17,916 posts


28th Aug 2002 at 4:34 pm

LoonyPandora - Daft Cow?

Daft Cow?

 
Quote:
What? Was that a rare blast of comedy genius from Loony?


Whaddya mean 'rare'!

what was so funny anyway? :-[ I don't get it.

LoonyPandora

| 17,916 posts


28th Aug 2002 at 5:18 pm

LoonyPandora - Daft Cow?

Daft Cow?

 
I still don't get why it's so funny....

1929

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28th Aug 2002 at 10:11 pm

 
[http://us.f1.yahoofs.com/groups/g_3260899/Meeting+Pics/26.01.02+(Manchester)/Jezza%27s+Pics/Loony+Pandora.jpg?bc0zUb9AVUtSoWNz]

LOONY: No! Please don't stick my hand to the wall with your overpowerful mind rays, NOOOOOOOOO!!!!
Triptoheaveandhoupdowntoandfroyouhaveno
wordtriptriptoadreamdragonhideyourwingsina
ghosttowersailscacklingateveryplatewebreak
krackedbyscatteredneedlesthelittleminute
goNg


 
 
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